Monday, March 2, 2015

Book Report

 When Eric Elliott was a toddler, he got his hand somehow stuck inside a Hoover vacuum cleaner. Folks were eventually able to extricate Eric from the cleaning machine, but from then on everyone called him Hoovey.

And for a long time, that nickname was about the worst thing that ever happened to the kid.

It's not like Hoovey's a horrible nickname or anything. That's the point. By the time Hoovey gets through the opening credits, our titular high schooler seems to have it all together. He's blessed with a loving family, a legion of buddies and some serious basketball skills. He's the star point guard on his basketball team and has aspirations of playing college ball. He has a solid faith and a buoyant optimism. And really, why wouldn't he? No way to see a glass as half-empty when it's filled to the brim, right?

So when the optimistic Hoovey starts experiencing double vision, he's not overly worried. He slaps on a pair of glasses and calls it good. And the headaches? Hey, everyone gets those every now and then. And the collapsing in the middle of the court while screaming in pain? Well … maybe a visit to the doctor's office wouldn't be amiss. But even when the doctor tells him he has a tumor the size of an orange wedged in his brain, Hoovey says, "It's actually kind of a relief. Now I know why I was playing so bad."

But no amount of optimism can wipe away the frightening truth. The tumor's gotta come out. And even if the neurosurgeon successfully removes it, there's a chance Hoovey could suffer permanent brain damage. It'll be costly, too, putting tremendous strain on the Elliotts' finances. Health crises can tear families apart. They can crush dreams. They can sometimes shake the deepest of faiths.

Oh, and basketball? Yeah, Hoovey, you should probably dribble that dream away.

For the first time since Hoovey got his hand stuck in that vacuum, he's learning that life can kinda suck sometimes. So what's your new game plan, Eric Elliott?

Positive Elements

Yes, the Elliotts deal with some serious challenges in Hoovey. But in good times and bad, the family's cup continues to overflow … with love.

OK, that feels a little overwrought. The Elliotts themselves would probably roll their eyes, which I think is one of their good points. This is not some super-pious, unrealistic family that most of us would never be able to aspire to. The Elliotts—father Jeff, mother Ruth, sister Jen and Hoovey—are loving, yes, but also fun and grounded. They have a great time ribbing one another and, even during the most difficult of moments, they never seem to lose their sense of humor.

And boy do they have some difficult moments. As the medical bills pile up, Jeff and Ruth find themselves at serious risk of losing everything they worked so hard to build—their farm, their home. But when faced with the sorts of losses that even Job might feel some sympathy for, the parents never lose sight of their real treasure. "Our family," Ruth tells Jeff. "That is the only dream we ever had."

Throughout the whole of Hoovey, this family shows a determined willingness to work hard through each and every obstacle. Jeff says that the Elliotts have never been quitters. But they also have an eye on the bigger picture: That it's important to live life fully and in a manner that's pleasing to God. They've figured out that they need to hold onto this world's treasures a bit loosely, knowing that our final reward is elsewhere.

[Spoiler Warning] There comes a point in the movie where Hoovey and the family are weighing whether he should return to the basketball court. Because doctors had to remove part of his skull, there's some danger in playing basketball: A blow to the head might even kill him. Is it an acceptable risk? Hoovey believes so. "I want to play again," he tells his parents. "I think God wants that, too." But, he adds, turning to his mother, who's naturally very concerned with her boy's safety, "I won't go against you."

Spiritual Content

Remember how I name-checked Job a minute ago? Well, the movie does too. The Elliotts are resilient, but they're very human. Almost every one of them wonders why it feels like God's punishing them for something. "Where did I screw up, Ruth?" Jeff asks her. "Where did I choke?" Hoovey asks the same question: "What did I do wrong?"

Coach Wilson responds by pointing to the biblical story of Job. He relates how it wasn't Job's fault that he had to endure tribulation—just like it's not the Elliotts' fault that Hoovey got sick. And how, the coach asks, did Job respond to God when his world was reduced to a pile of ash? "It was all [God's] to begin with," Hoovey answers, with a sense of newfound understanding.

Hoovey is a story about holding onto faith even during the toughest of circumstances, and we see the Elliotts' faith at every turn. They pray before every meal. They openly talk about faith and God. Jeff gives Hoovey a cross necklace that belonged to his grandfather as a reminder of what's "really important." And when Hoovey's going in for surgery, he reminds his pops not to worry. "If I—you know," Hoovey says, purposefully skirting the word die, "I know where I'm going."

Coach Wilson leads the guys in a before-game prayer that seems to be a common ritual for them. Hoovey's recovery is referred to as an honest-to-goodness miracle more than once. Both Ruth and Jeff ask God for strength. Hoovey reminds his mom about what she says about dreams: If it's "good and true, it came from God." At a picnic, a pastor blesses the meal.

When Hoovey and Jeff skid off a snowy road during a medical emergency, three strangers give their truck a push. Narrating, Ruth casts a spiritual light on the visitors, suggesting they might've been angels. 

Sexual Content

When Hoovey sees a classmate named Kristen for the first time after summer break, he's a bit surprised by how she looks. "You look bigger," he says, hastily adding, "taller, I mean." As Hoovey is recovering from surgery, he pushes a wheelbarrow along a railroad track to improve his balance. Kristen gets in the wheelbarrow, and eventually the two tumble off the rail, with Hoovey hovering over a prostrate Kristen until he's sure she's OK. She is … and she kisses him.

Violent Content

Basketball isn't an overtly violent sport, but we do see some players jostle and get pushed down. Every point of contact seems heightened by the fact that Hoovey's head is so fragile. When an opponent knocks him down, a teammate rushes to his aid, threatening to break the other guy's jaw.

After getting shoved by a teammate during practice, Hoovey falls to the floor in serious pain, wailing. Hoovey's eventual surgery (which is not shown beyond his hair getting shaved) leaves the back of his head bandaged for quite a few scenes. (We later see scars.) Jeff rescues a teen from a burning car. He and his fellow firefighters use the Jaws of Life to pry the door loose and pull the unconscious kid (who's bleeding a bit) from the car. They battle a house fire.

Jeff jokes that Hoovey looks like a serial killer when he wears glasses. There's talk of a guy who got killed at another school.

Crude or Profane Language

Other Negative Elements

As mentioned, Hoovey works on getting his balance back by walking on the railroad tracks.

Conclusion

When the Elliott kids were little, Jeff would bolster them by reminding them about what "the angel first said in the Bible: Do not be afraid."

But that's far easier said than done when the truly dark times of life come along.

Jeff tells Hoovey—and us—about a famous tightrope walker who scampered across Niagara Falls on a high wire. One day, the tightrope walker brought a wheelbarrow to the wire and asked the teeming onlookers whether they believed he could push the contraption across. "Yes!" they said. But when he asked for volunteers to ride that wheelbarrow, not a soul spoke up.

That, Jeff says, is what faith is all about: To trust enough to ride in the wheelbarrow. It's something Hoovey and his dad both have to grapple with. And it's good to watch them do it, because it's something we all have to grapple with, right along with the question of how much risk is too much.

Directed by Sean McNamara (who brought Soul Surfer to theaters in 2011),Hoovey is based on the true story of Eric Elliott and his family, pulled from Jeff Elliott's self-published book Rebounding From Death's Door. And even as the plot focuses on Hoovey's medical struggles and the family's unflagging fight against adversity, the movie is ultimately about faith—and the ability of the Elliotts to trust God in some seriously uncertain times.

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Scent

Shelby Payne
18 February 2015
English I
4th Block


Beautiful Scent


One summer night, Shelby was on her way to her boyfriends house because it was date night and Austin was going to take her on a beautiful adventure. Austin planned to take Shelby to the truck and go on a picnic in the field by a lake. Austin picked out a flower field next to a lake. While driving to the destination, Shelby started to wonder where they were going. Austin finally parked his truck and they both setup the picnic right before Shelby sat down, Austin said look over yonder, so Shelby looked over yonder and Austin got up and took three steps and grabbed a bundle of wild flowers, right before Shelby turned around and sat down she looked in the middle of the picnic and there the flowers laid she said aww Austin where did u get those, they're so beautiful I love them!!! Shelby picked them up and smelled them, she said that they were the most beautiful scented flowers she ever smelled. As she looked closer to admire them she found sunflowers, roses, daffodils, and poppies. They were the most and bestest scented flowers she had ever smelled in her life, to this day Shelby can still remember the lavished smell of the beautiful sunflowers, roses, daffodils, and poppies.  

Stewart Little Writing

Shelby Payne
17 February 2015
English I
4th Block

Big to Small in Seconds


One day at lunch Shelby’s friends Tiffany, Erin, Sarah, Bree, Hannah, and Brooke. Were sitting at the lunch table eating. Shelby had to go get her lunch from her locker, so all her friends waited. Sarah made Shelby eat something really hot and spicy and Shelby didn't have anything to drink so she drank her water all. Everyone stood up and walked to the drinking fountain with her. After Shelby slurped a drink of water, she immediately shrank to three and half inches tall, but everyone thought that she went to the bathroom.
Tiffany, Erin, Bree, and Brooke looked in the bathroom for her. After Shelby wasn't able to be found, everybody went and found her boyfriend Austin. They thought that she was with him. Unfortunately she wasn't. Austin looked in all the places that they met before school, during school, after classes, and where they met after school. After the group of them looked everywhere they thought she could be Austin was freaking out and got upset, so he tried to calm down. 
Austin, Tiffany, Erin, Sarah, Bree, Hannah, and Brooke met back at the drinking fountain. Austin decided to have a drink. As he looked up he, saw a little figure moving and he looked closer to see what it was. It was her! He had found his girlfriend. Why was she was three and half inches tall? He questioned everyone that she hung out with and nothing was said. Austin dropped Shelby off at her classes outside the door. Shelby climbed all the way to her desk. 
For her next block, Shelby had to stand on top of a locker so that her boyfriend could see her and take her to her next class which was AG. During Ag, Shelby had to climb up the desk and sneak around wherever she desired a couple of times. Shelby almost had gotten stepped on she ran so fast to a hiding spot which was kind of nice for her in a way. After AG she had to climb on the handrail to meet her boyfriend Austin. Austin takes her by her hand and puts her on his shoulder. Austin normally took Shelby home but today it was going to be different because Shelby was going to Austin’s house to help him study Before they went to Austin’s house, they had to stop and put gas in his tank. Austin asked Shelby if she wanted anything and Shelby said Arizona Sweet Tea. Austin comes back out to the truck and opened the sweet tea for Shelby and she takes a drink.
Austin forgot to push the gas tank lid back. When he came back from doing, that Shelby was back to her regular size. He freaked out because the last time he was in the truck there was a three and half inches of Shelby.In a way he was glad to have her back. He gave her a BIG hug and asked a bunch of questions.    

Campfire Story

Shelby Payne
2015 February 10th
English I
4th Block


The Payne’s Fun Family Vacation


One week after the Tazewell County Fair, my family, friends and I drive down to Effingham, IL to go to Lake Sara. Everyone that came down stayed there for two weeks in August right before the kids had to go back to school. Every night bonfire. The parents Rod, Rhonda, Ed, Marilyn, Mike, and Jackie roundup all the kids and tell them to go get wood so JR, JT, Shelby, Kayla, Bridget, Travis, Eddie, and Peter all figured out the best place to find wood. All the kids grab a big bundle, carry the wood back and told the parents. Everyone gets ready for dinner by taking a shower. After everyone was done, we all sat at the table and ate. We waited until 7:00pm to make the fire after everyone sets out different kinds of food. At 10:30 or so, some people had smores with RITZ crackers with caramel and chocolate or use Reese’s peanut butter cup or little candies. There were some hot dogs and brats to roast if some people were still hungry.
In the daylight around 7:00pm, the children shotguns at targets and went to the park or beach. Everyone sits around the campfire to eat and the littler kids asked the bigger kids to play hide and go seek in the dark. Later all the children played flashlight tag. After everyone settled down, all the older kids sat and talked while the parents and little kids went to bed. The older kids JT, JR, Shelby, Kayla, Travis, and Eddie stayed up. Hearing laughing around the campfire, I got all warm and fuzzy inside and a little warm on the outside. I moved away from the fire. After a while i got cold so I grabbed my camouflage tie blanket with bright orange on the inside. I sat back down and got all comfy. My brother, his friends, Kayla and Eddie wanted sweet tea so I maneuvered my way up and grabbed sweet tea, then came back and passed them out. Meanwhile I was cold and need to snuggle back up in my blanket.
As I sat down, I gazed into the beautiful blazing fire with a beautiful rust color on the wood and building up is a daffodil, Ferrari red, and tangerine. I imagined if everyone fell asleep around the fire and people cuddled because it was cold. The girls had blankets and the boys didn’t, so the girls gave them the blankets. Then Kayla and I were freezing so the boys said to hare because nobody wanted to get up because it was getting colder.
As I stopped looking at the fire, I heard music, playing and we all sat there and listened to music as we sang. After listening to music, JR, JT, Shelby, Kayla, Eddie and Travis played a mix of flashlight tag and hide and hide and go seek. All of us came back and ate chocolatey graham clusters with almonds and toffee bits, drank sweet tea and listened to the crackles and pops that came from the fire. Before everyone knew it  we were all looking at the stars and the cracks in our eyelids. Before we fell asleep, the boys were complaining that it was cold, so both of us gave them the blankets we had. Then we complained that it was cold, so they said come here to share the blankets. From now on, I will forever love campfires.


THE END       

Wednesday, February 18, 2015

About Me

  I think of myself as an average write.... I am pretty good for my age but I always have room to improve in many different. I am mostly skilled to creative writing because i get to express my feelings and different views of things. I enjoy reading descriptive and creative writing. Challenges I have when writing are things to come up with to write about. I love to write about different things like people and food just like our journals we do in class. I have set a couple goals for when writing, like making it fun to read and seeing if I can imagine what I'm writing.